Poem in progress….*preview*

we’re apart tonight,
and I miss you,
but you probably don’t notice I’m not where you are.
because I don’t make your night
the way you make mine.
the way clocks make time.
because without clocks,
24 hours don’t exist.
it’s about where the sun rises
and when it will sit.
we are apart tonight,
and I miss you,
but you aren’t mine to miss.


I’m still writing more now, but I thought that was a good stopping point to share with all of you since I haven’t been on the blog lately. Feedback welcome.


About lovelyiskey

I'm a disciple of Jesus that happens to write/perform poetry and have a book. I'm a poet that happens to wait tables. I'm a waitress that happens to have a blog. Welcome to my life.
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3 Responses to Poem in progress….*preview*

  1. UnWritten says:

    I would say you are progressing quite nicely…..definitely feeling this.

  2. journaladdict says:

    “but you aren’t mine to miss”….ah don’t we all know that feeling?

    i love it.


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